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Chapter 5 - The Chart That Lied
Chapter Goal: Protect Nora and verify whether the post-death chart edit was accidental or deliberate.
Micro-Turn: Nora develops a fever and returns to the same hospital, where Chloe is pressured to sign a “quality review acknowledgment” that misstates what she was told.
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Planted Clue / Foreshadowing: Nora's chart suddenly contains a sentence saying the family declined additional review — a sentence Chloe never approved.
Cliffhanger Cut: Someone breaks into the narrator's home and steals the laptop used to view Julian's files, but misses the original flash drive hidden inside Julian's old childhood trophy.
