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Chapter 2 - Three Months Behind

Chapter Goal: Meet the property manager before the family can change the story.

Micro-Turn: Aaron learns the rent is three months late even though he has been sending money, and the management file lists him as a resident.

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Planted Clue / Foreshadowing: A contact number on the file is one digit different from Aaron's real number and forwards to Melanie.

Cliffhanger Cut: The manager opens an addendum showing Aaron guaranteed a $28,000 repair advance he has never heard of.

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